‘The sky widens to Cornwall’. Because the
tide is out, the ferry sets us down on the beach, well short of the slipway at Rock. I enquire from the
ferryman the way to St
Enodoc, and he points us towards Brea Hill, where we must climb over the
dunes, take the path onto the golf links and then follow the fairway. This we
do, facing into the fine rain that blows off the Atlantic and up the Camel
estuary towards Padstow.
The dunes are steep and take some negotiating, but at the top we see something
I have never witnessed at close quarters before: first one, then two larks
ascending. They take off vertically from the heather; I hear them before I see
them, but I am near enough to see their beaks open and their throats vibrating
as they sing. Rising a few feet at a time, they steady themselves in mid-air,
then continue their ascension, singing all the time. The exaltation is
mine as much as it’s theirs:
Lark song and
sea sounds in the air,
And splendour,
splendour everywhere.
These aren’t my words, though, they’re John Betjeman’s. Earlier that day I had
been walking along the clifftops on the other side of the estuary, aiming for
(but not reaching) Trevose Head, last visited during a Cornish family holiday
fifty years ago. I recently led a study day on Betjeman: preparing for it, I
read with attention some poems he had written about this same coastline in the
same year I had visited them. 1966 must have been a bad year for Betjeman.
‘Tregardock’ begins with sea-fog and ‘The moan of warning from Trevose’:
Only the shore
and cliffs are clear.
Gigantic slithering shelves of slate
In waiting
awfulness appear
Like journalism full of hate.
At the end of the poem, he contemplates his
own lack of courage (as he sees it) in the face of such contempt for everything
he stood for:
And I on my
volcano edge
Exposed to ridicule and hate
Still do not
dare to leap the ledge
And smash to pieces on the slate.
It’s interesting that Betjeman, who
sometimes over-punctuated his poems, uses none at all here – suggesting the accelerating pressure under which he all but throws himself over the cliff edge. He called
his 1966 collection, High and Low,
which title I had lazily assumed simply referred with characteristic nostalgia
to High and Low Church Anglicanism.
I see now it had another, darker purpose: while Tregardock records his lowest point, ‘Winter Seascape’, which finds him
again standing on the cliff edge, this time celebrates a very different mood:
Here where the
cliffs alone prevail
I stand exultant, neutral, free,
And from the
cushion of the gale
Behold a huge consoling sea.
It was in 1966 that I, too, endured
ridicule from my A level English classmates for daring to suggest that Betjeman
deserved to be taken as seriously as W.H. Auden and the rest of the Thirties
poets (I had just bought and read Robin Skelton’s
Penguin anthology, Poetry
of the Thirties). I do not think I was wrong. At that time, I based my
argument on his celebrated hate poem, ‘Slough’.
But discussing ‘Winter
Seascape’ with the students at my study day, it became clear that this poem
is in part a homage both to Auden’s ‘Look, stranger’ (‘Stand stable
here / And silent be’) and to ‘The
Sunlight on the Garden’ – from which Betjeman consciously recycles Louis
MacNeice’s daring internal rhyme ‘under … thunder’. Going further back, I think
‘Winter Seascape’ even redresses Matthew Arnold’s ominous 'salt estranging sea’ (from 'To Marguerite - continued’), which becomes for Betjeman ‘a huge consoling sea’.
Jonathan Glancey is an architectural critic
whose journalism I have always enjoyed. He is a Betjeman enthusiast, too.
Here’s his description
of St Enodoc:
Betjeman is buried in the
happily batty village church of St Enodoc, itself interned [did he mean interred? the church was once all but buried under sand] in an
eccentric dip in the very middle of the golf course. Betjeman's gravestone, immediately
inside the church gate, is a joy, all curly-whirly script, playfully elegant
stone-carved eye candy for aesthetes.
Leaving aside ‘happily batty’, I can’t share Glancey’s
appreciation of the gravestone, which seems to me to misrepresent the Betjeman
to whom this church and churchyard meant so much:
So soaked in worship you are loved too well
For that dispassionate and critic stare
That I would use beyond the parish bounds
Biking in high-banked lanes from tower to
tower
On sunny, antiquarian afternoons.
True,
Betjeman as a young man could play the aesthete; true, too, he had (as editor
of the Architectural Review and of
the Shell Guides to Britain) shown a
sometimes post-modern delight in typography. But I think he would have
preferred some less self-advertising stone. After all, ‘As I reach our hill,’
he had concluded in his valedictory poem ‘Old Friends’ – also from High and Low – ‘I am part of a sea
unseen’.
Adrian
Barlow
[References: all quotations from
Betjeman’s poems above are taken from his Collected
Poems (London: John Murray, 2006 edition). ‘The sea widens to Cornwall’ is
the opening sentence of ‘Old Friends’ (pp.245-6), from which also comes the
final quotation of this post. The lines beginning ‘Lark song and sea sounds’
are the final couplet of ‘Seaside Golf’ (p.165). Betjeman’s contemplation of
suicide is in the poem ‘Tregardock’ (p.239), and the poem I suggest contains
echoes of Auden, MacNeice and Arnold is ‘Winter Seascape’ (p.243). His
admission that he loves St Enodoc ‘too well’ to describe it objectively comes
from ‘Sunday Afternoon Service in St. Enodoc Church, Cornwall’ (p.113).
[Illustrations: (i) St Enodoc Church (8th
May 2015); (ii) John Betjeman’s gravestone.
Text and
photographs © the author.
I have
written about Betjeman before: John
Betjeman and Windlesham