Short measures is a very occasional series in which I discuss a short poem (no more than twelve lines - shorter than a sonnet, therefore). Alas, for copyright reasons I can rarely publish a complete 20th. century poem or one by a living author. Suggestions for future poems to include in the series are always welcome.
My heart leapt up on Friday last week when I beheld a rainbow over Norwich Castle. At eight minutes past five I came out of M&S and saw the great arch of a perfect rainbow landing on top of the Norman Keep. It was a fine sight over what advertisers used to call ‘A fine city, Norwich’ - and unexpected, too: the pavements were dry and wherever else it had been raining, it wasn’t raining just then in Norwich.
My heart leapt up on Friday last week when I beheld a rainbow over Norwich Castle. At eight minutes past five I came out of M&S and saw the great arch of a perfect rainbow landing on top of the Norman Keep. It was a fine sight over what advertisers used to call ‘A fine city, Norwich’ - and unexpected, too: the pavements were dry and wherever else it had been raining, it wasn’t raining just then in Norwich.
My heart leaps up when I behold
A rainbow in the sky.
So was it when I first began,
So is it now I am a man,
So be it when I shall grow old
- Or let me die.
The child is father to the man,
And I could wish my days to be
Bound each to each by natural piety.
I suppose ‘The child is father to the man’
is one of Wordsworth’s best-known lines - along with, say, ‘I wandered lonely
as a cloud’, ‘Earth has not anything to show more fair’ and perhaps ‘Surprised
by joy, impatient as the wind’. But each of these three comes from the opening
of a poem. Wordsworth himself, however, would later reproduce the last three
lines of ‘The Rainbow’ as the epigraph to his great meditation on childhood,
‘Intimations of Immortality'.
As for ‘My heart leaps us’, these opening words
were to echo in the title of one of Wordsworth’s poems of 1800, ‘Hart-Leap Well’. This is a
longish poem that begins as a chivalrous ballad celebrating both the heroism of
the huntsman and the endurance of the hunted stag. Oddly, the poem’s second
half becomes a kind of anti-hunting polemic: no matter that the huntsman had
admired the courage of the stag whom he had pursued to the death, the place
where the animal had died becomes an accursed spot, a warning to future
generations of would-be sportsmen: ‘the unspeakable in pursuit of the uneatable’,
in Oscar Wilde’s neat apothegm.
But unlike the conventions of medieval and
renaissance poetry, there is no play on heart/hart in ‘The Rainbow’ itself. The
poem, at least its first six lines, seems almost naïve: di-dum di-dum di-dum di-dum, as schoolchildren would once have
chanted it. Beware, though, of trivializing this miniature poem: ‘Wow! A rainbow! How exciting is that!’ No, this is more
than just another ‘Surprised by joy’ moment.
Any good poem warns against the temptation
to take words for granted. I think that ‘behold’ in the first line means much
more than simply ‘see’. The word itself more often acts as a command – ‘Ecce homo’– ‘Behold the man!’ – or as an
exclamation: ‘Lo and behold!’ Here, though, Wordsworth’s line implies that he
simultaneously sees the rainbow and is awe-struck by it – a physical as well as
emotional response already foreshadowed by ‘My heart leaps up’. He both beholds the rainbow and is beholden to it: the fact that he responds to it is, as he sees it, proof of his continuing humanity.
The rainbow is not described. By contrast
with my trite phrases about the ‘perfect rainbow’ that was such a ‘fine sight’
over Norwich, Wordsworth’s rainbow simply is. Its power to move him is not just a
memory from the past (‘when my life began’) that has stayed with him ‘now I am
a man’; more importantly, it is a commitment to the
future: ‘So be it when I shall grow old’. And if/when he fails to respond, then it’ll be time to quit: the triple anaphora, ‘So was it - so
is it - so be it’, is startlingly undercut by the immediate reversal, ‘ - Or let
me die’. There’s a confident assurance
here, as elsewhere in Wordsworth, that nature will not let him down. Nor, for his part, must he fail Nature.
Some I suppose might call this moral
earnestness priggish, for the rainbow is about more than pleasure, it is
about a moment of passionate recognition, of spiritual illumination. It is a
shock and a lesson to last a lifetime. Wordsworth argues repeatedly that Nature,
what Coleridge calls (in Frost at Midnight) the ‘Great Universal Teacher’ is the source of mankind’s moral understanding. And like prayer for George
Herbert, this is ‘something understood’ instinctively, not something readily put into
words, taught in school or learned from books:
One impulse from
a vernal wood
Will teach you more of man,
Of moral evil
and of good,
Than all the sages can.
‘Or let me die’ is both a reversal and a
bridge from the naive exhilaration of the opening lines to the mature
meditation of the closing. For Wordsworth, that the child is father to the man
is so self-evident it needs no explanation. Like the rainbow itself, this just
is so: as adults we learn from, and build on, the experiences of childhood. I
have always resented the condescension of those who tell children the ‘real
world’ is what comes after school – but perhaps that’s because of the
implication that teachers don’t live in the real world either. Did Shakespeare, in As You Like It, coin the phrase ‘second childhood’? Very aptly, if
so. During the past twelve months I have spent more time involved with the very
elderly than at any other period of my life. Children can literally become
parents to their parents. Wordsworth was right.
Finally, ‘natural piety’. Piety used to
mean the duty of loyalty and love children owe their parents. Virgil’s Aeneas
wasn’t pious because he was always on his knees: he acknowledged the duty due
to his father Anchises. For Wordsworth, that piety is both a natural impulse and an
impulse of loyalty to nature itself. So, in ‘The Rainbow’ he simply says that
this dual impulse is what - all being well (‘I could wish’) - will keep us
going for a lifetime. It’s a grown-up idea, carefully planted in a childlike,
but not childish, poem.
Adrian Barlow
[photo: Rainbow over Norwich Castle © the
author
Adrian, You write that the rainbow, ‘is about a moment of passionate recognition, of spiritual illumination. It is a shock and a lesson to last a lifetime.’ But I wonder, if this not to weigh down the poor old rainbow with more spiritual freightage and meaning than it can possibly bear and provide?! I do not know, but I have never experienced any such emanations from the apprehension of a rainbow as you describe. Rainbows can certainly be very dramatic and exciting manifestations of the spectrum of the primary colours. But if they constitute ‘a moment of passionate recognition’, then I have to ask, ‘of what?’ Likewise, if they constitute a moment, ‘of spiritual illumination’, I confess to being baffled (perhaps because I lack any sense of the numinous). Neither can I see the rainbow as affording, ‘a lesson to last a lifetime.’ Of what nature is this lesson? How does it manifest itself? Can there be such a thing as a belief that does not take the form of a proposition?
ReplyDeleteI confess that I love the lines:
One impulse from a vernal wood
Will teach you more of man,
Of moral evil and of good,
Than all the sages can.
But I don’t believe it!
I think that ‘The Rainbow’ is a very fine poem, which — with great economy — expresses the danger of ever losing a sense of wonder and a quick response to the natural world. But that for me is sufficient.
You’re right Peter: it is a poem which expresses the danger of ever losing a sense of wonder. But I think the word ‘piety’ indicates that for Wordsworth - if not for you or other readers - there is a moral connection between man and the natural world which the rainbow symbolises. It’s the arch, if you, like connecting the two. The lesson to last a lifetime is just that: 'don’t become so insensitive to nature you lose that connection. If you do you run the risk of losing part of your essential humanity.'
DeleteMany thanks for this response, Adrian. ‘Piety’ is indeed a difficult word for us now (and if someone called me pious I would not be best pleased!). However, I’ve looked the word up in Webster’s New Dictionary of Synonyms: ‘fidelity, allegiance, fealty, loyalty, devotion, piety denote faithfulness to something which one is bound to by a pledge of duty.’ Half a page is then devoted to the precise meanings and nuances of each word, accompanied by illustrative sentences taken from the works of known writers. The following quotation on piety could, I think, hardly correspond more closely to the sentiment you identify in Wordsworth’s ‘The Rainbow’
ReplyDelete< having matured in the surroundings and under the special conditions of sea life, I have a special piety toward that form of my past ... I have tried with an almost filial piety to render the vibration of life in the great world of waters — CONRAD >